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Kashaf Illahi Bux Banbhan
2k17/mc/49
BS-III
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Depression Due To Social Networking
The virtual world of social networking has changed the paradigm of everyday routine of individuals living in contemporary era of booming technology. People posting about their updates be it personal life or professional promotions, showing off their newly bought commodities, updating selfies with people they deem prominent, all in an attempt to sustain a virtual online identity which is far from reality at best. This difference between real and virtual identity is one of the major causes of depression and social anxiety these days.
It seems like the more technology we have the more we are stressed out, social media have changed our lives, our way of communication, socializing and especially our way of thinking, people nowadays are more concerned with how the show their life online rather than how they actually feel or live it in real. Researchers have found that obsessively and excessive usage of social media platforms leads to depression, impulsive disorder, problems with mental functioning, paranoia and loneliness.
Making new relationships through facebook or other social media sites can be fun and attractive at the beginning but is not as simple and beautiful as you thought at first, the major drawbacks of the relationships made through social media networks are at the higher risk of mortality. Unsuccessful relationships are not just the reason behind social media depression or anxiety but there is another major and common factor which we can see in our surroundings and that is social media ‘comparisons’ and ‘lifestyles expectations’. Social media creates unrealistic life expectations as Everybody on social media is always up to something more epic than you are.when a teenager scroll down their newsfeed seeing people posting a perfect picture of their exciting life, it’s easy for them to think that all of their friends are having perfect life and he/she is missing out so in order to get acceptance in the society of social media, he/she starts showing off a fake yet perfect picture of his life which is then being a reason for someone else’s depression and jealousy. Girls and women are more likely to gain negative effect of social media fake lifestyles, They feel as if their bodies aren’t good enough as many bloggers or other people add filters and edit their pictures in order to look ‘perfect’. A news report published in The Express Tribune says that depression affects 44% of the entire population of Pakistan, Women (57.5%) and Men (25%). Isolation, social anxiety, less attention, jealousy and stress were the major factors. Social media is for entertainment, not for competition. Bullying or bashing among kids and adults is an old age phenomenon but now with the help of social media is far more common and easy than ever because attacking or insulting someone’s work or look online is fun but it can have adverse effects on person being attacked. A study last year by kaspersky lab and iconkids & youth found that 16 percent of children surveyed said they are more afraid of being bullied online than offline (in real life). ‘Online bashing can be seen as the new face of depression on social media’ said department of Health spokesperson Enrique Tayag.

Social networking is inevitable. It is an essential part of the globalized world today and will continue to exist as an important factor in both economic as well as social ecosystem. Though its societal, psychological and cultural implications cannot be denied, and thus requires effective measures for its policies and usage. Just like anything in excess causes problems, so does the phenomenon of social networking. Overuse of it leads to disruption of social fabric and confines sociability to mobile and computer screens, which leads to a distorted sense of perception of relationships, and ultimately depression. The cure to social networking problems lies in controlled voluntary use of social networking platforms with focus on functionality rather than for socialization.


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Kashaf Illahi Bux Banbhan
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Article

Depression Due To Social Networking
The virtual world of social networking has changed the paradigm of everyday routine of individuals living in contemporary era of booming technology. People posting about their updates be it personal life or professional promotions, showing off their newly bought commodities, updating selfies with people they deem prominent, all in an attempt to sustain a virtual online identity which is far from reality at best. This difference between real and virtual identity is one of the major causes of depression and social anxiety these days.
Findings from a National Survey shows 1787 young adults that were asked about their use of 11 most popular social media platforms like facebook, twitter, reddit, tumblr, google plus, instagram, pinterest, snapchat, linkedin and vine. Analysis showed that people from the survey using all or most of the social media platforms were likely to have three times the risk of depression and anxiety because people who use many platforms end up multitasking such as frequently switching or engaging in social media on multiple devices is related to poor attention cognition and mood. It seems like the more technology we have the more we are stressed out, social media have changed our lives, our way of communication, socializing and especially our way of thinking, people nowadays are more concerned with how the show their life online rather than how they actually feel or live it in real. Researchers have found that obsessively and excessive usage of social media platforms leads to depression, impulsive disorder, problems with mental functioning, paranoia and loneliness.
Making new relationships through facebook or other social media sites can be fun and attractive at the beginning but is not as simple and beautiful as you thought at first, the major drawbacks of the relationships made through social media networks are at the higher risk of mortality because you never know what is the background of the person you are interacting with or why he/she is interested in talking with you? Many more question arises Which may basically sooner or later harm you and your feelings because texting is a poor way to know someone which may result in sadness or depression. Unsuccessful relationships are not just the reason behind social media depression or anxiety but there is another major and common factor which we can see in our surroundings and that is social media ‘comparisons’ and ‘lifestyles expectations’. Social media creates unrealistic life expectations as Everybody on social media is always up to something more epic than you are.when a teenager scroll down their newsfeed seeing people posting a perfect picture of their exciting life, it’s easy for them to think that all of their friends are having perfect life and he/she is missing out so in order to get acceptance in the society of social media, he/she starts showing off a fake yet perfect picture of his life which is then being a reason for someone else’s depression and jealousy. Girls and women are more likely to gain negative effect of social media fake lifestyles, They feel as if their bodies aren’t good enough as many bloggers or other people add filters and edit their pictures in order to look ‘perfect’. Social media is for entertainment, not for competition. Bullying or bashing among kids and adults is an old age phenomenon but now with the help of social media is far more common and easy than ever because attacking or insulting someone’s work or look online is fun but it can have adverse effects on person being attacked. A study last year by kaspersky lab and iconkids & youth found that 16 percent of children surveyed said they are more afraid of being bullied online than offline (in real life), 7 out of 10 children were admitted to hospitals due to depression and traumatic effects from bullying. ‘Online bashing can be seen as the new face of depression on social media’ said department of Health spokesperson Enrique Tayag.
Samantha Rosenthal PhD, MPH a research associate in the department of epidemiology at Brown University School of Public Health says that these factors of social media are associated with mental health disorders, in a study published last November that surveyed 264 young adults, they explored that these negative experiences are common more than 80 percent had at least one negative experience while 60 percent had more than 4 or more bad social networking experiences.
            Social networking is inevitable. It is an essential part of the globalized world today and will continue to exist as an important factor in both economic as well as social ecosystem. Though its societal, psychological and cultural implications cannot be denied, and thus requires effective measures for its policies and usage. Just like anything in excess causes problems, so does the phenomenon of social networking. Overuse of it leads to disruption of social fabric and confines sociability to mobile and computer screens, which leads to a distorted sense of perception of relationships, and ultimately depression. The cure to social networking problems lies in controlled voluntary use of social networking platforms with focus on functionality rather than for socialization.

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