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Life of an Artist v/s Doctor

Both the disciplines, An Artist and a Doctor are at the opposite ends of the spectrum in human life, The differences between them are strikingly radical as they both have different experiences of life, responsibilities and end goals. Both the disciplines are tough and highly respectful in every aspect of life but have different pathways which make it unique and different. Not only apparently but metaphorical they are different as well.

Art and science deal with a very basic and fundamental distinction that actually differentiates both disciplines from each other on a core level i.e. the element of subjectivity. Art is subjective while Science is objective. This subtle yet inescapable determinant of subjectivity has paved way for both these disciplines (or career paths) and is very much evident in the resulting evolution of both art and science. Mona Lisa painted by Leonardo Da Vinci cannot be painted again by another artist and still carry the same magic. Nor the works of Picasso or Monet be duplicated by any other person and still be received with high esteem. Instead society would call such art as plagiarism not art. However on the other hand, science thrives on experimentation based on previous advances, to ensure validity of recurring events. It deals with objective nature of events to form its conclusions which are largely based on processes we can ascertain without doubt. Hence a doctor evolves and builds upon older advances and makes further developments based on previously confirmed phenomena.

            Doctor usually enjoys a life that employs "certainty" as its main element. Dealing with sick patients, prescribing medicines, undergoing procedures, surgeries and what not, all under strict operating procedures that he must adhere to diligently.

We had a small talk with our friend Dr Mahnoor Laghari. on asking why she chose to become a doctor she said it was my parents dream that i should become a Doctor. Dr mahnoor laghari told us, Doctors need to work hard with full concentration as we don't have a chance to make mistakes. Meanwhile an artist leads a life surrounded by "uncertainty". An artist's worst nightmare is the blank canvas. As he starts to gear up for making art, he initially faces an apparent doom in  the form of a blank sheet of paper (or screen) which can lead to either an amazing work of art or a kind of art that no one would appreciate even one bit. The point is, there is insane amount of "uncertainty" at play here. The artist fears whether what he wants to express through his art would really resonate with his audience? what if they don't understand my message? what if i fail to convey my message through my paintings? how would the society perceive my work? will it make any difference to the world at all? fears of others, fears emanating from self, as well as plentiful other layers of constant reasoning surrounds an artist's thought process.

The societal responses towards a Doctor and an Artist, our society have zero tolerance and it's not acceptable that a child should leave his studies and become what he actually wanted to be since day one. An artist whether singer, stage artist or painter faces harsh responses from our society which make it hard for them to work and get appreciation. Our society is slightly intolerant in this matter. While coming to a medical doctor, his struggles and societal responses, a doctor is a dignified and noble profession for us. When asked Adeel Soomro passionate painter and singer of hyderabad, how an artist sees his life different from others and what are the societal responses towards an artist? He replied, our life is more colorful than others, people always generalises us and our work by saying ‘tum tou artist ho tumhara koi future naheen hai tum bus rangon se khelte rahoge’. But in real we have the power to see what a normal eye can't. My determination towards sketching and singing never let me down over such societal behaviours.

The struggle and hard work of a student to become a doctor or an artist actually requires a lot of patience and dedication but the later path ways are not the same. A doctor which is the most dignified profession in our society once get selected in a medical college have a linear pathway, a normal and scheduled life with a nice cabin environment for patients he deals with . While an artist doesn't have a step by step process in his work, does not have a routined or scheduled life, would have a messy room and dark eyebags. Doctor have a certainty in his work and it is actually needed because it is the matter of one's life and death, while artist doesn't have any certainty and it is not required thou. The work of an artist can be or can not be appreciated by the audience once or twice and that's okay, because criticism will help an artist to know about the choice of his audience and to make his work valuable and worthy he can do better next time with a paint brush or mic on the stage. Often Artists are associated with depression and unhappiness but two of the recent researches show that artist are actually more happy than other people. The first is a massive study* using data from the European Value Survey, the British Household Panel, the Swiss Household Panel, by the research team at the university of zurich. The survey includes each person’s occupation, and then asks them to rate their job satisfaction on a scale from 1 to 10. The results show that “artists generally are happier than the rest of the population.”

A second study from Vanderbilt University’s Curb Center for the Arts, Entertainment and Public Policy, surveyed 13,000 graduates of arts programs. Examining these results, Curb Center Director Steven j. Tepper says “arts graduates are resilient and resourceful, they are happy with the careers they put together. Anthony Carnevale, Director of Georgetown University’s Center on education and the workforce, seconds this conclusion “artists tend to be happy with their choices and lives.”

Artists view the process of working to be of special importance. They particularly value the opportunity to use initiative in their jobs. The fact they have an interesting job, have a job which meets their ability. And that they can learn new skills on the job. These aspects relate to procedural aspects of work rather than to what is produced. In contrast, artists pay less importance to other aspects, such as job security.

Emerging artist sami khan, University of sindh dropout. He left his studies because he wanted to become a singer and opened his own studio of singing on asking he told us about the environment of an artist,  A dark and small room, so many big and small paintings on the walls of room, a corner full of books and sketches, and dim light this setup will actually irritate a normal person but this is the environment of an artist, our lives are not perfect. we have ups and downs we get rejections but that's my biggest strength and it makes me to become a better singer and furthermore he has a message for our young students that a person who spends millions on his studies with what he is not happy with will not succeed but a person should recognise his passion and work on it and he will excel.

Our society needs both the professions. No discipline is less worthy or less respectful as both have different responsibilities in our society, doctor deals with the cure, solutions of a patient while artist is not confined with the answers only, his thought process can also encompass questions, provocations or expressions  .We should not neglect art as it is the core part of every culture and society because art is an individual's innate need to express his or her own self.

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Edited by Talha Qamar 

Make intro interesting. These are profession not disciplines here. Only Proper noun and first word of sentence can be capitalized. Proper noun (Dr mahnoorlaghari) not capitalsied.

Why to capitalize An Artist and a Doctor? This will be published. Such mistakes will be counted as blunder.

Plz revisit it, see language, format, sentences and do proper editing

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Feature (Revised)

Life of an Artist v/s Doctor

Both the disciplines ?, An Artist and a Doctor are at the opposite ends of the spectrum in human life, the differences between them are strikingly radical as they both have different experiences of life, responsibilities and end goals. Both the disciplines are tough and highly respectful in every aspect of life but have different pathways which make it unique and different. Not only apparently but metaphorical they are different as well.

Art and science deal with a very basic and fundamental distinction that actually differentiates both disciplines from each other on a core level i.e. the element of subjectivity. Art is subjective while Science is objective. This subtle yet inescapable determinant of subjectivity has paved way for both these disciplines (or career paths) and is very much evident in the resulting evolution of both art and science. Mona Lisa painted by Leonardo Da Vinci cannot be painted again by another artist and still carry the same magic. Nor the works of Picasso or Monet be duplicated by any other person and still be received with high esteem. Instead, society would call such art as plagiarism, not art. However, on the other hand, science thrives on experimentation based on previous advances, to ensure the validity of recurring events. It deals with the objective nature of events to form its conclusions which are largely based on processes we can ascertain without a doubt. Hence a doctor evolves and builds upon older advances and makes further developments based on previously confirmed phenomena.

    The doctor usually enjoys a life that employs "certainty" as its main element. Dealing with sick patients, prescribing medicines, undergoing procedures, surgeries and what not, all under strict operating procedures that he must adhere to diligently.

We had a small talk with our friend Dr. Mahnoor Laghari. on asking why she chose to become a doctor she said it was my parents' dream that I should become a Doctor. Dr mahnoorlaghari told us, Doctors need to work hard with full concentration as we don't have a chance to make mistakes. Meanwhile, an artist leads a life surrounded by "uncertainty". An artist's worst nightmare is the blank canvas. As he starts to gear up for making art, he initially faces an apparent doom in the form of a blank sheet of paper (or screen) which can lead to either an amazing work of art or a kind of art that no one would appreciate even one bit. The point is, there is an insane amount of "uncertainty" at play here. The artist fears whether what he wants to express through his art would really resonate with his audience? what if they don't understand my message? what if I fail to convey my message through my paintings? how would society perceive my work? will it make any difference to the world at all? fears of others, fears emanating from self, as well as plenty other layers of constant reasoning surrounds an artist's thought process.

The societal responses towards a Doctor and an Artist, our society have zero tolerance and it's not acceptable that a child should leave his studies and become what he actually wanted to be since day one. An artist whether singer, stage artist or painter faces harsh responses from our society which make it hard for them to work and get appreciation. Our society is slightly intolerant in this matter. While coming to a medical doctor, his struggles and societal responses, a doctor is a dignified and noble profession for us. When asked Adeel Soomro passionate painter and singer of Hyderabad, how an artist sees his life different from others and what are the societal responses towards an artist? He replied, our life is more colorful than others, people always generalize us and our work by saying ‘tum tou artist ho tumhara koi future naheen hai tum bus rangon se khelter ahoge’. But in reality, we have the power to see what a normal eye can't. My determination towards sketching and singing never let me down over such societal behaviors.

The struggle and hard work of a student to become a doctor or an artist actually requires a lot of patience and dedication but the later pathways are not the same. A doctor which is the most dignified profession in our society once get selected in a medical college has a linear pathway, a normal and scheduled life with a nice cabin environment for patients he deals with. While an artist doesn't have a step by step process in his work, does not have a routine or scheduled life, would have a messy room and dark eye bags. Doctor have certainty in his work and it is actually needed because it is the matter of one's life and death, while the artist doesn't have any certainty and it is not required, thou. The work of an artist can be or cannot be appreciated by the audience once or twice and that's okay because criticism will help an artist to know about the choice of his audience and to make his work valuable and worthy, he can do better next time with a paintbrush or mic on the stage. Often Artists are associated with depression and unhappiness but two of the recent researches show that artist is actually more happy than other people. The first is a massive study* using data from the European Value Survey, the British Household Panel, the Swiss Household Panel, by the research team at the University of Zurich. The survey includes each person’s occupation and then asks them to rate their job satisfaction on a scale from 1 to 10. The results show that “artists generally are happier than the rest of the population.”

A second study from Vanderbilt University’s Curb Center for the Arts, Entertainment and Public Policy, surveyed 13,000 graduates of arts programs. Examining these results, Curb Center Director Steven j. Tepper says “arts graduates are resilient and resourceful, they are happy with the careers they put together. Anthony Carnevale, Director of Georgetown University’s Center on education and the workforce, seconds this conclusion “artists tend to be happy with their choices and lives.”

Artists view the process of working to be of special importance. They particularly value the opportunity to use initiative in their jobs. The fact they have an interesting job, have a job which meets their ability. And that they can learn new skills on the job. These aspects relate to procedural aspects of work rather than to what is produced. In contrast, artists pay less importance to other aspects, such as job security.

Emerging artist sami khan, is University of Sindh dropout. He left his studies because he wanted to become a singer and opened his own studio of singing on asking he told us about the environment of an artist,  A dark and small room, so many big and small paintings on the walls of room, a corner full of books and sketches, and dim light this setup will actually irritate a normal person but this is the environment of an artist, our lives are not perfect. we have ups and downs we get rejections but that's my biggest strength and it makes me become a better singer and furthermore he has a message for our young students that a person who spends millions on his studies with what he is not happy with will not succeed but a person should recognize his passion and work on it and he will excel.

Our society needs both professions. No discipline is less worthy or less respectful as both have different responsibilities in our society, doctor deals with the cure, solutions of a patient while an artist is not confined with the answers only, his thought process can also encompass questions, provocations or expressions. We should not neglect art as it is the core part of every culture and society because art is an individual's innate need to express his or her own self. 

Revised 

Kashaf Illahi Bux Banbhan

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2k17/mc/49

Feature (Revised)

Life of an Artist v/s Doctor

Still there is no human angle, some thing interesting. Not in feature format. Main purpose of feature is to entertain. At some place proper noun is not with cap

Both the disciplines, An Artist and a Doctor are at the opposite ends of the spectrum in human life, The differences between them are strikingly radical as they both have different experiences of life, responsibilities and end goals. Both the disciplines are tough and highly respectful in every aspect of life but have different pathways which make it unique and different. Not only apparently but metaphorical they are different as well.

Art and science deal with a very basic and fundamental distinction that actually differentiates both disciplines from each other on a core level i.e. the element of subjectivity. Art is subjective while Science is objective. This subtle yet inescapable determinant of subjectivity has paved way for both these disciplines (or career paths) and is very much evident in the resulting evolution of both art and science. Mona Lisa painted by Leonardo Da Vinci cannot be painted again by another artist and still carry the same magic. Nor the works of Picasso or Monet be duplicated by any other person and still be received with high esteem. Instead society would call such art as plagiarism not art. However on the other hand, science thrives on experimentation based on previous advances, to ensure validity of recurring events. It deals with objective nature of events to form its conclusions which are largely based on processes we can ascertain without doubt. Hence a doctor evolves and builds upon older advances and makes further developments based on previously confirmed phenomena.

            Doctor usually enjoys a life that employs "certainty" as its main element. Dealing with sick patients, prescribing medicines, undergoing procedures, surgeries and what not, all under strict operating procedures that he must adhere to diligently.(incomplete sentence and without verb)

We had a small talk with our friend Dr Mahnoor Laghari. on asking why she chose to become a doctor she said it was my parents dream that i should become a Doctor. Dr mahnoor laghari told us, Doctors need to work hard with full concentration as we don't have a chance to make mistakes. Meanwhile an artist leads a life surrounded by "uncertainty". An artist's worst nightmare is the blank canvas. As he starts to gear up for making art, he initially faces an apparent doom in  the form of a blank sheet of paper (or screen) which can lead to either an amazing work of art or a kind of art that no one would appreciate even one bit. The point is, there is insane amount of "uncertainty" at play here. The artist fears whether what he wants to express through his art would really resonate with his audience? what if they don't understand my message? what if i fail to convey my message through my paintings? how would the society perceive my work? will it make any difference to the world at all? fears of others, fears emanating from self, as well as plentiful other layers of constant reasoning surrounds an artist's thought process.

The societal responses towards a Doctor and an Artist, our society have zero tolerance and it's not acceptable that a child should leave his studies and become what he actually wanted to be since day one. An artist whether singer, stage artist or painter faces harsh responses from our society which make it hard for them to work and get appreciation. Our society is slightly intolerant in this matter. While coming to a medical doctor, his struggles and societal responses, a doctor is a dignified and noble profession for us. When asked Adeel Soomro passionate painter and singer of hyderabad, how an artist sees his life different from others and what are the societal responses towards an artist? He replied, our life is more colorful than others, people always generalises us and our work by saying ‘tum tou artist ho tumhara koi future naheen hai tum bus rangon se khelte rahoge’. But in real we have the power to see what a normal eye can't. My determination towards sketching and singing never let me down over such societal behaviours.

The struggle and hard work of a student to become a doctor or an artist actually requires a lot of patience and dedication but the later path ways are not the same. A doctor which is the most dignified profession in our society once get selected in a medical college have a linear pathway, a normal and scheduled life with a nice cabin environment for patients he deals with . While an artist doesn't have a step by step process in his work, does not have a routined or scheduled life, would have a messy room and dark eyebags. Doctor have a certainty in his work and it is actually needed because it is the matter of one's life and death, while artist doesn't have any certainty and it is not required thou. The work of an artist can be or can not be appreciated by the audience once or twice and that's okay, because criticism will help an artist to know about the choice of his audience and to make his work valuable and worthy he can do better next time with a paint brush or mic on the stage.

Emerging artist sami khan, University of sindh dropout. He left his studies because he wanted to become a singer and opened his own studio of singing on asking he told us about the environment of an artist,  A dark and small room, so many big and small paintings on the walls of room, a corner full of books and sketches, and dim light this setup will actually irritate a normal person but this is the environment of an artist, our lives are not perfect. we have ups and downs we get rejections but that's my biggest strength and it makes me to become a better singer and furthermore he has a message for our young students that a person who spends millions on his studies with what he is not happy with will not succeed but a person should recognise his passion and work on it and he will excel.

Our society needs both the professions. No discipline is less worthy or less respectful as both have different responsibilities in our society, doctor deals with the cure, solutions of a patient while artist is not confined with the answers only, his thought process can also encompass questions, provocations or expressions  .We should not neglect art as it is the core part of every culture and society because art is an individual's innate need to express his or her own self.

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Only proper noun and first word of sentence should be with cap.
This is an essay, not feature. A feature should be reporting based, has some human angle, intro should be interesting.Draw a scenario , how a doctor is and how an artist is.
Main purpose of feature is to provide entertainment, while it contains information but that is given in subtle way.
Referred back

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Feature

Life of an Artist v/s Doctor

Both the disciplines, An Artist and a Doctor are at the opposite ends of the spectrum in human life, The differences between them are strikingly radical as they both have different experiences of life, responsibilities and end goals. Both the disciplines are tough and highly respectful in every aspect of life but have different pathways which make it unique and different. Not only apparently but metaphorical they are different as well.

Art and science deal with a very basic and fundamental distinction that actually differentiates both disciplines from each other on a core level i.e. the element of subjectivity. Art is subjective while Science is objective. This subtle yet inescapable determinant of subjectivity has paved way for both these disciplines (or career paths) and is very much evident in the resulting evolution of both art and science. Mona Lisa painted by Leonardo Da Vinci cannot be painted again by another artist and still carry the same magic. Nor the works of Picasso or Monet be duplicated by any other person and still be received with high esteem. Instead society would call such art as plagiarism not art. However on the other hand, science thrives on experimentation based on previous advances, to ensure validity of recurring events. It deals with objective nature of events to form its conclusions which are largely based on processes we can ascertain without doubt. Hence a doctor evolves and builds upon older advances and makes further developments based on previously confirmed phenomena.

            Doctor usually enjoys a life that employs "certainty" as its main element. Dealing with sick patients, prescribing medicines, undergoing procedures, surgeries and what not, all under strict operating procedures that he must adhere to diligently.

We had a small talk with our friend Dr Mahnoor Laghari. on asking why she chose to become a doctor she said it was my parents dream that i should become a Doctor. Dr mahnoor laghari told us, Doctors need to work hard with full concentration as we don't have a chance to make mistakes. Meanwhile an artist leads a life surrounded by "uncertainty". An artist's worst nightmare is the blank canvas. As he starts to gear up for making art, he initially faces an apparent doom in  the form of a blank sheet of paper (or screen) which can lead to either an amazing work of art or a kind of art that no one would appreciate even one bit. The point is, there is insane amount of "uncertainty" at play here. The artist fears whether what he wants to express through his art would really resonate with his audience? what if they don't understand my message? what if i fail to convey my message through my paintings? how would the society perceive my work? will it make any difference to the world at all? fears of others, fears emanating from self, as well as plentiful other layers of constant reasoning surrounds an artist's thought process.

The societal responses towards a Doctor and an Artist, our society have zero tolerance and it's not acceptable that a child should leave his studies and become what he actually wanted to be since day one. An artist whether singer, stage artist or painter faces harsh responses from our society which make it hard for them to work and get appreciation. Our society is slightly intolerant in this matter. While coming to a medical doctor, his struggles and societal responses, a doctor is a dignified and noble profession for us.

The struggle and hard work of a student to become a doctor or an artist actually requires a lot of patience and dedication but the later path ways are not the same. A doctor which is the most dignified profession in our society once get selected in a medical college have a linear pathway, a normal and scheduled life with a nice cabin environment for patients he deals with . While an artist doesn't have a step by step process in his work, does not have a routined or scheduled life, would have a messy room and dark eyebags. Doctor have a certainty in his work and it is actually needed because it is the matter of one's life and death, while artist doesn't have any certainty and it is not required thou. The work of an artist can be or can not be appreciated by the audience once or twice and that's okay, because criticism will help an artist to know about the choice of his audience and to make his work valuable and worthy he can do better next time with a paint brush or mic on the stage but it is not with the case of a doctor. And that's the reason a doctor works on objectivity, he has certainty, stability and confirmations in his work.

Emerging artist sami khan, University of sindh dropout. He left his studies because he wanted to become a singer and opened his own studio of singing on asking he told us about the environment of an artist  A dark and small room, so many big and small paintings on the walls of room, a corner full of books and sketches, and dim light this setup will actually irritate a normal person but this is the environment of an artist, our lives are not perfect. we have ups and downs we get rejections but that's my biggest strength and it makes me to become a better singer and furthermore he has a message for our young students that a person who spends millions on his studies with what he is not happy with will not succeed but a person should recognise his passion and work on it and he will excel.

Our society needs both the professions. No discipline is less worthy or less respectful as both have different responsibilities in our society, doctor deals with the cure, solutions of a patient while artist is not confined with the answers only, his thought process can also encompass questions, provocations or expressions  .We should not neglect art as it is the core part of every culture and society because art is an individual's innate need to express his or her own self.