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A building constructed in 70s how it can become historic? 
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 Allahabad the Grand Mosque

Sindh is famous for its history and historical places in all over the world. Mosque Allahabad which also shows historical background is present in the small town of interior Sindh Kandiaro. Mosque Allahabad which constructed in 70’s the area of mosque is 1000 ecrs and has 1minar and 101 cubes.This mosque was settled by Mitha sain who migrated from Rehmatpur. With the passage of time this mosque has been known as religious institutions many scholars and researchers comes from different corners of the world to conduct lectures and give

 knowledge about Tajwid Ahdees Nazar e Quran and many other languages like french Arabi and English. Khuwaja Muhammad Bakshi the care off of the mosque told that this mosque is known as school of thoughts that has old house orphan house hospital educational institutions which is present fpr the people who lives there. The unique thing of that mosque in the era of technology they are taking complete advantages and developed digital libraries that has digital computers, Digital Quran Pak and other scientific equipment. They also gives the education of Qalb e zikar people around the world comes to attend the annual jalsa in which They speak about modern learning and preaching about Islam This jalsa held for 3 days at kandiaro where people not only come from pakistan but Indonesia, Dubai, canada,Australia and Different countries of the world. The secretariat Mufti Abdul Rehman says we are working in the way of religion since many years our organisations are working around the world. He told that this mosque was constructed in 1979 with simple mud but now since 12 years this mosque is under construction and has modified in modern tiles Marbal and mirror work doors. The most important thing of this mosque is it has developed a university by Name Al ghosia in which students would be teach in modern ways and 300 rooms are also made for the residential purpose. This mosque has the biggest Khankha where a large number of believers comes with faith of learning. 300 followers are set to serve this mosque.

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